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media type="custom" key="660327" -Christina Haldiman

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** Chapter 1 **** : **
Setting: The story takes place in Georgia after the Civil War. Plot: Has to do with a 40 year old woman who is having an affair with a younger man. Tone: Dark, and sad Point of view: 3rd person-narrator, and there is some 1st person dialogues The author writes alot of show and not tell like: // "It's sort of duskin' down dark. De booger man might ketch yuh." // which is telling us it is night now and the boogeyman might get you. // "The sun was gone, but he had left his footprints in the sky." //  which means that even though the sun is gone there is still light in the sky because of the stars in the sky. -Christina Haldiman   The author writes with a lot of dialect, black dialect. When nobody talks she writes in past tense, but when somebody talks, then it is written in present tense. She seems to be very educated, because of the way she wrote the book. There is a lot of show and not tell in it, should I give an example? (// "The sun was gone, but he had left his footprints in the sky" // p. 1) -jelena helmer

** Chapter 2: **
<span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(228,165,238); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(228,165,238); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(251,249,249); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)">Setting: Nanny's house <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(228,165,238); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(251,249,249); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Tone: mad and sad Point of view: there is alot of first person dialogue // "One mornin' soon, now, de angel wid de sword is going tuh stop by here." // Which means She will die soon. // "Freedom found me with a daughter in her arms" // Which means she was a slave and was free now.

-Christina Haldiman

//<span style="COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><span style="COLOR: rgb(35,44,134)"> "Honey, de white man is de ruler of everything as fur as Ah been able tuh find out. //<span style="COLOR: rgb(33,5,128)"> <span style="COLOR: rgb(35,44,134)"> Maybe it's some place way off in de ocean where de black man is in power, but we don't know nothin' but what we see.  So de white man throw down de load and tell de niggter man tuh pick it up. He pick it up because he have to, but he don't tote it.  He hand it to his womanfolks. De nigger woman is de mule uh de world so fur as Ah can see.  Ah been prayin' fuh it tuh be different wid you. Lawd, Lawd, Lawd!" <span style="COLOR: rgb(33,5,128)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(35,44,134)"> (page 14) She tells us, how black peoples were treated in this time. That the black people were worthless and especially the black woman. The black man were under the white people but under the black man were the black woman. // "One mornin' soon, now, de angel wid de sword is gointuh stop by here." // This shows us that the nanny is going to die soon and she wishes for her little granddaughter Janie, that she will have a better life, that she is going to be treated well. -jelena helmer

//" She searched as much of the world as she could from that top of the front steps and then went on down to the front gate and leaned over to gaze up and down the road. Looking, waiting, breathing short with impatience. Waitng for the world to be made"// She is hoping to see thing better and she is trying to look for it out there and waiting there for it to come.


 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 3 **** : **
<span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(236,235,233); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(246,243,239); TEXT-ALIGN: left"> <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(246,244,243)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(239,238,235)"> <span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(251,249,249); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(246,243,239); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Nannys parlor Tone: happy Point of view: Narrator, and uses dialogues // “The new moon had been up and down three times before she got worried in mind.” // It had been about 3 months before she got worried.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">"The new moon had been up and down three times before she got worried in mind." //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> (p. 22) That is show and not tell again, it means that it had been 3 months before she got worried. // "Lawd, you know mah heart. Ah done de best Ah could do. De rest is left to you." // (p. 24) This is the last sentence that Nonna says in this book, before she dies 1 months later. -jelena helmer

//"There are year that ask questions and years that answer. Janie had had no chance to know things, so she had to ask. Did marriage end the cosmic loneliness if the unmated? Did marriage comple love like that sun the day?// She wants to ask things that is moving around her is right or wrong and what is it doing to her. Life moves before U know it.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 4 **** : **
<span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(248,246,246); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)">Setting: Killicks House and his barn <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(248,246,246); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Tone: hurtful Point of view: Narrator, and uses dialogues // The sun from ambush was threatening the world with red daggers but shadows were grey and solid looking around the barn. // Red means rage Grey means hopelessness

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“The sun from ambush was threatening the world with red daggers but shadows were grey and solid looking around the barn.” //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">The color red represents rage and grey stands for hopelessness. -jelena helmer //" There is a basin in the mind where words float around on thought and thought on the sound and sight"// Her mind was telling her what to do but she doesnt want to listen to it.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 5 **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Green Cove Springs Tone: nervous Point of view: Narrator, and uses dialogues

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Y'all ain't got enough here to cuss a cat on without gittin' yo' mouf full of hair. He was saying they say stuff without putting their foot in their mouth.

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">//"Everybody come right forward and make merry. I god, it's mah treat."// He wanted to make people happy so he gave them soda crackers and cut some cheese for them as his treat.

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="DISPLAY: block; FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; TEXT-ALIGN: left">//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">"Thank yuh fuh yo' compliments, but mah wife don't know nothin' 'bout no speech-makin'. Ah never married her for nothin' like dat. She's uh woman and her place is in de home." <span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">  <span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"> //  Joe was saying that Janie couldn't make a speech cause she didn't know how. He said he didn't marry her for her brains. He said her place is at home.

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">“It had two stories with porches, with banisters and such things. The rest of the town looked like servants’ quarters surrounding the “big house”. And different from everybody else in the town he put off moving in until it had been painted, in and out. And look at the way he painted it-a gloaty, sparkly white. The kind of promenading white that the houses of Bishop Whipple, W.B. Jackson and the Vanderpool’s wore. It made the village feel funny talking to him- just like he was anybody else.” //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> She shows us here how the Joe’s house doesn’t fit in this little town. It is big, nice and it shows his money. Everybody else is living in little houses and he has this nice big house. -Jelena Helmer //" And look at the way he painted it- a gloaty, sparkly white. The kind of promenading white that the houses of Bishop Whipp;e, W.B. Jackson and the Vannderpool's wore."// She try to tell us that the white paint is so mice and so good that nothing around it can compare with it.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 6 **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Green Cove Springs Point of view: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: Nonsense

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He had seen Death coming and had stood his ground and fought it like a natural man. // The mule fought strong til it's death.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The near ones got nearer and the far ones got near. // They were close but got closer and people farther got closer.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Daisy is walking a drum tune. You can almost hear it by looking at the way she walks. // Which is saying that everywhere she walks people can hear her from like a mile away.

-Christina Haldiman //" THe great clap of laughter that they have been holding in, brursts out."// They were very happy like after along time that they didnt laugh like that
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 7 **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(248,247,246); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Green Cove Springs Point of view: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: Embarrassment and anger // She got nothing from Jody except what money could buy, and she was giving away what she didn't value. // Which means she wanted love. She wanted to be by her side. // So he struck Janie with all his might and drove her from the store. // He had hit her so hard, she flew out of the store.

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">„She got nothing from Jody except what money could buy, and she was giving away what she didn’t value.“ //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> She shows us here, that Janie wanted love, but that she didn’t get any. She got money and Janie says to herself // „Ah’ll lie and say he is. If Ah don’t, life won’t be nothin‘ but uh store and uh house.“ // -jelena helmer //"She had learned how to talk some and leave some"// She just want to let it go and ddont want to fight back let us know that her life was in control of someone else not her.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 8 **** : **
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(253,252,252); TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(239,235,235)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(246,244,244); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Green Cove Springs Point of view: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: Sadness // "Tuh think Ah been wid Jody twenty yeahs and Ah just now got tuh bear de name uh poisonin' him!" // She was saying that he was trying to get people to think Janie was trying to poison him.

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">„A sound of strife in Jody’s throat, but his eyes stared unwillingly into a corner of the room so Janie knew the futile fight was not with her. The icy sword of the square-toed one had cut off his breath and left his hands in a pose of agonizing protest“ //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> This means that Jody died. -jelena helmer //" But she sat a long time with the walls creeping in on her. Four walls sqeezing her breath out."// She was scared to stay inside too much and look around at the same thing all the time when no one is around.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 9 **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Green Cove Springs Point of view: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: happiness

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Most of the day she was at the store, but at night she was there in the big house and sometimes it creaked and cried all night under the weigh of lonesomeness. // She would lay there at night thinking and crying because she was alone without anyone by her side.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">She had found a jewel down inside herself and she had wanted to walk where people could see her and gleam it around. // She found something inside of her she didn't know she had so she wanted to show the world.

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">„she sent her face to Joe’s funural, and herself went rollicking with the springtime across the world.“ //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> this means, that she her face is at the funural but she is still mourning for Joe. -jelena helmer //" She was no reason to rush at changing things around. She would have the rest of her life to do as she pleased."// She felt free and dont have to be under control of anybody else now and she have her own life to do what she want and have her own time to do it.
 * Kenny Cao**

** Chapter 10 **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(243,241,241); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: The store in Green Cove Springs Tone: Happy Point of View: 3rd person narrator // He broke the pack and thrust one between his full, purple lips. // That was trying to show us that he had opened the pack of cigarettes and started smoking one. // "B'lieve Ah done cut uh hawg, so Ah guess Ah better ketch air." // Tea Cake realized he said something wrong so he thought he better leave for a while. // Soon its amber fluid was drenching the earth and quenching the thirst of the day. // Which means the moon was rising as the day turned to night. media type="youtube" key="6F4a7B5NMIQ&hl=en&color1=0x402061&color2=0x9461ca" height="355" width="425"

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">„He broke the pack and thrust one between his full, purple lips.“ //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> Means that he opens the pack of cigarettes and smokes one. // „So she sat on the porch and watched the moon rise. Soon its amber fluid was drenching the earth, and quenching the thirst of the day.“ // Janie was sitting on the porch and looked at the moon. It rised and the day turned to night. <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">-Jelena helmer //"But it no place to show her fear there in the darkness between the house and the store"// SHe try to show that she is not scared anywhere at the house and the store but really inside her, she is fear in the dark.
 * Kenny Cao**

** __Chapter 11__ **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(247,243,243); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Green Cove Springs Point of View: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: Love and Happiness // Look lak we done run our conversation from grass roots tuh pine trees. // He was saying that there conversation was done. // He could be a bee to a blossom, a pear tree blossom in the spring. He seemed to be crushing scent out of the world with his footsteps. Crushing aromatic herbs with every step he took. Spices hung about him. He was a glance from God. // Janie was thinking about Tea Cake and how she couldn't resist him. // He did not return that night nor the next and so she plunged into the abyss and descended to the ninth darkness where light has been. // Janie thought that Tea Cake just left her after that night. So she was hurt, confused, upset, and didn't know what to do. // "Janie, Ah hope God may kill me, if Ah'm lyin'. Nobody else on earth kin hold uh candle tuh you, baby. You got de keys to de kingdom." // Tea Cake was trying to prove to Janie that he is deeply in love with her and there is noone else for him.

-Christina Haldiman <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">„lookin‘ glass“ //<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"> is a mirror. „look lak we done run our conversation from grass roots tuh pine trees.“ means that the conversation went out of the frame // "Janie, Ah hope God may kill me, if Ah'm lyin'. Nobody else on earth kin hold uh candle tuh you, baby. You got de keys to de kingdom." // He wants to show Janie how much he loves her. <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(33,5,128); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">-Jelena Helmer //" All the fears that circumstance could provide and the heart feel, attacked her on every side"// SHe feel scared from evrywhere around her as she is in it.
 * Kenny Cao**

** <span style="COLOR: rgb(255,255,255)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(193,16,16)">__Chapter 12__ **** <span style="COLOR: rgb(193,16,16)">:  **
<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Point of View: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: happiness for janie
 * <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: ** <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)">3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues  <span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Done took to high heel slippers and a ten dollar hat! // Janie was a rich woman and was with Tea Cake a poor man.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">So her firm intention looked like an accident and she didn't have to give her opinion to folks along the way. // She was really mad a Janie and gave her a look, but she was also giving her opinion about Janie to people that she doesn't know.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(36,28,146)">//„Ah just like a chicken. Chicken drink water, but don’t pee-pee.“// He says that he can keep secrets. //„Some of dese mornin’s and it won’t be long, you gointuh wake up callin me and Ah’ll be gone.“// She is going to leave the town. -Jelena Helmer //"High hell slipper, necklace, earrings, everything ha wants tud see in me."// He cares about her and wants her to look good with him. Show that he really loves her.
 * __Kenny Cao__**

** __Chapter 13__ **** : **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(249,246,246); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Janie leaves Green Cove Springs with Tea Cake and goes to Jacksonville, Flordia Point of View: 3rd person Narrator, Dialogues Tone: happy and sad // He drifted off into sleep and Janie looked down on him and felt a slef-crushing love. So her soul crawled out from its hiding place. // She was always scared to love and would hide but now she isn't scared to love so she comes out of hiding.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(60,25,204)">//„Jacksonville.Tea Cake’s letter had said Jacksonville.“// This means that she is going to go to Jacksonville with Teacake. They are going to get married there. //„So her soul crawled out from its hiding place.“// She can just be herself, and she lives how she always wanted to. -Jelena Helmer " //The train beat on itself and danced on the shiny stell rails after miles."// THe trail was going very fast and smooth on their way to where they want to be. ==**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><span style="COLOR: rgb(255,255,255)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(212,12,12)">__Chapter 14__  ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial"><span style="COLOR: rgb(255,255,255)"><span style="COLOR: rgb(212,12,12)">:   **== <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: rgb(246,44,185); FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(249,248,245); TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Everglades Point of View: 3rd person Narrator, Dialogues Tone: happy, hard working // It's hard trying to follow your shoe instead of your shoe following you. // Which means the sole of the shoe is worn out.
 * __Kenny Cao__**

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(63,41,153)">//"It's hard trying to follow your shoe instead of your shoe following you."// This means that the shoe is really worn out, it’s kind of sarcastically. -Jelena Helmer "//Piano living three lifetimes in one"// The piano was very old it been using more than 3 of it lifetime and it still there.
 * __Kenny Cao__**

<span style="COLOR: rgb(227,13,25)"> **<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">__Chapter 15__ ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Everglades Point of View: 3rd person Narrator, Dialogues Tone: Janie felt Jealousy and anger

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">If he said anything at all, she'd take the opposite side and hit him or shove him and run away to make him chase her. // Nunkie was flirting with Tea Cake and Janie could tell.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(41,25,190)">//„Whut would Ah do wid dat lil chunk of a woman wid you around? She ain’t good for nothin‘ exceptin‘ tuh set up in uh corner by de kitchen stove and break wood over her head. You’se something tuh make uh man forgit tuh git old and forgit tuh die.“// Tea Cake shows her how much he loves her and that he would never cheat on her with another women, not even if they are younger. He is absolutely happy with Janie. -Jelena Helmer "//A little seed of fear was growing into a tree"// Now she is not fear as she used to be. and she know that she is different now not like before.
 * __Kenny Cao__**

**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">__Chapter 16__ ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Everglades Point of View: 3rd person Narrator, Dialogues Tone: depressed

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He claimed that she had been shaped up by a cow kicking her from behind. // He was joking Mrs. Turner about how she looked.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Before they realized it the sun was cooler and the crowds came pouring onto the muck again. // It was just like the summer when they realized it.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(42,18,175)"> //„Shucks. If dat’s her notion she’s barkin‘ up de wrong tree. Mah hands is full already.“// Janie says that she has found the man that she is happy with and that she is absolutely not interested in meeting any others. //„Before they realized it the sun was cooler and the crowds came pouring onto the muck again.“// The saison had chenged and people started coming back to work on the muck. -Jelena Helmer "//All gods who receive homage are cruel"// Saying that thing they have they never care and just beening mean to it.
 * __Kenny Cao__**

**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">__Chapter 17__ ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Everglades Point of View:3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: Jealous

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The way he petted and pampered her as if those two or three face slaps had nearly killed her made the women see visions and the helpless way she hung on him made men dream dreams. // Women were jealous on Janie because of the way he treated her and they wanted that, and the men were jealous of Tea Cake because they wanted Janie.

-Christina Haldiman

**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">__Chapter 18__ ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: #e4a5ee; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #f3eded; TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: #f62cb9; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #f9f6f6; TEXT-ALIGN: left">Setting: Everglades Point of View: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: scared

<span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: #e4a5ee; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #f3eded; TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="DISPLAY: block; COLOR: #f62cb9; FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #f9f6f6; TEXT-ALIGN: left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">//Through the screaming wind they heard things crashing and things hurtling and dashing with unbelievable velocity.// Which means they heard really strong winds and things crashing everywhere really hard outside. It was a really strong storm.

//The wind came back with triple fury, and put out the light for the last time//. The wind was so strong that made the light go out.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(42,25,154)">//„The people felt uncomfortable but safe because there were the seawalls to chain the senseless monster in his bed.“// The people feel safe because they have the seawall that protects them from the water. //„Ah wuz fumblin‘ round and God opened the door.“// With meeting Tea Cake, Janies life has changed. She experienced more with him that she ever did before. //„They seemd to be staring at the dark, but their eyes were watching God.“// They are waiting for the storm and for the water, hidden in a room, but they are actually hoping for God’s mercy that they won’t die. -Jelena Helmer

__**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">Chapter 19 ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **__
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Everglades Point of View: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: sadness

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">//Trucks lined with drag kept rolling in from the 'Glades and other outlyng parts, each with its load of twenty-five bodies.// There were dead bodies everywhere from the storm so trucks went to go get all of them.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">She could knock the head off of a chicken-hawk sitting up a pine tree. // She was really good at shooting with a rifle.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(31,25,159)">//„The time of dying was over. It was time to bury the dead.“// It was time for a new start after Janie and Tea Cake had so much trouble getting away from the hurricane. -Jelena Helmer <span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">

**<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">__Chapter 20__ ****<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188); FONT-FAMILY: Arial">: **
<span style="COLOR: rgb(216,44,188)"> <span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Arial Black', Gadget, sans-serif">Setting: Everglades but Janie then left and went back to Pheobies house Point of View: 3rd person narrator, 1st person dialogues Tone: sadness

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Janie stirred her strong feet in the pan of water. The tiredness was gone so she dried them off on the towel. // She was done resting so she dried off her feet.

//<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">She pulled in her horizon like a great fish-net. Pulled it from around the waist of the world and draped it over her shoulder. So much of life in its meshes! She called in her soul to come and see. // She pulled in her memories around her so she would never forget and she wanted to remember them.

-Christina Haldiman

<span style="COLOR: rgb(36,22,146)">//„Saw the hand of horror on everything.“// Everything has been destroyed by the hurricane. //„Ah done been tuh de horizon and back and now Ah kin set heah in mah house and live by comparisons.“// She had a great time with Tea Cake, she really enjoyed beeing with him. „//He could never be dead, until she herself had finished feeling and thinking.“// She won’t forget him until she dies, she will always think about him.